OET Answers

Malala Yousafzai OET Writing Sample Answer Ms Jenkins Director Community Health Service 41 Vulture Street West End Brisbane, 4101 20 January 2022 Dear Ms Jenkins, Re : Mrs Malala Yousafzai DOB: 15 January 1950 I am writing to request home care for Mrs Malala Yousafzai who is being discharged toady following a total right shoulder replacement for right shoulder osteoarthritis. Her daughter will stay with her for one month in her single-storey house following her discharge today. Mrs Yousafzai's post-operative phase was largely uneventful. She has been compliant with her physiotherapy and exercise regime. Post-operatively, her blood remain in normal limits and pain was managed with analgesia and a cold compression for four hours each day. Upon discharge, the Mrs Yousafzai was educated regarding post-operative care. She will wear a right arm sling for five weeks, and will require physiotherapy in the outpatient’s clinic thrice a week and hydrotherapy twice a week. She needs to avoid ...

Margret Martin OET Writing Sample Answer The Manager  Women’s Refuge Shelter 21 east Street INR 1998 London 30 December 2021 Dear Manager, Re : Ms Margret Martin DOB : 31 June 2001 I am writing to refer Ms Margret Martin who is a postnatal mother. She requires emergency short term admission for accommodation and other support services following her discharge today.  Ms Margret Martin was admitted to hospital on 23 December 2021 for delivery. She delivered a female healthy baby without any complications. Her postnatal progress was excellent with minimal blood loss. She preferred the baby to bottle feed rather than breastfeeding. Baby’s feeding is noted to be good and normal.  Ms Martin is single and used to live with her boyfriend but currently refuses to reside with him, as he is verbally abusive and even not the father of the child. Presently, she is unemployed and can not stay with her family, as her only sister stays overseas and parents died a couple of years ago in a...

Connectives are one of the important elements in writing which help to write concisely. So here I have listed certain frequently used connectors that you can use in your writing to score high. Idea changers However,  He is able to walk  around the house;  however, he has usual aches. Even though, Even though he has usual aches, he is able to walk around the house. Although, Although he is able to walk around the house, he has usual aches. Adding information Along with   She was commenced on intravenous Amoxicillin along with oxygen supplement Apart from this, /that Apart from this, tHe has been advised to quit smoking. In addition to this, /that In addition to this, Aspirin 100mg was administered. Mentioning some key information  Please note, Please note, He has a follow-up review. Kindly note, Kindly note, She has a full blood examination. Normal Letter connectives Post-operatively, Post-operatively, she was provided with daily dressing.  Durin...

If we’re writing a letter to a Doctor, Physiotherapist, Nurse Unit Manager etc and the recipient’s name is not given how can we write the salutation If you don’t have a name for the recipient then to use their job title which is the next best thing and definitely acceptable for health care writing. So we would use as a salutation for example Dear Doctor, Dear Physiotherapist, Dear Nurse unit manager, Etc.... and that’s a completely acceptable way of starting the letter if you don’t have a name for your reader.